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    00Stevo, October 1st, 2017, 4:35 pm ( Reply )


    I think I did quite well with Miyasako's expressions on this page, but what do you guys thinking?
    Thanks for reading this update

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    Meleeman, October 6th, 2017, 5:44 am ( Reply )


    i'd say it's an improvement
    the next thing I would suggest is including more body language. i find that more difficult to execute but if you can pull it off it really brings your characters to life ya know?

    00Stevo, October 6th, 2017, 4:38 pm ( Reply )



    @Meleeman: It's a little hard for me, being part Italian (Italians tend to 'move a lot' when they talk) I find it difficult to make the right amount of movement

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